Selasa, 06 September 2016

THE BRAVE TUCY


Tucy is a young turtle. He and his family are going to Galo Island. They do not go there alone. They swim the sea with other turtle families. They go to Galo Island together to attend the party that is held by The King. Today is The King’s birthday. The King asked his citizen to join his birthday party in the palace. The party is held tonight.

Galo Island is about 10 km from their island, Pago Island. Tucy and his family live in that island with almost 25 other turtle familes. Usually, Tucy spendS his time by playing water and sand in the beach with his friends. Pago Island has beautiful scenery. It has the blue sea and the white sand along the beach. It also has hills with the green trees. 
Tucy and his family come to the Galo Island when the party has been started. The Palace looks so beautiful from faraway. The palace is glowed by thousand lights. Many turtles come to the party. They come from other islands around Galo island. 
Tucy and his family join other citizenS who have arrived before them. In that party, Tucy meets his friends; Kiki, Pepy, and Yali. They enjoy the party and have fun together. They see such beautiful wireworks. It makes the dark night be more beautiful.
Tucy and his frIends sing and dance together. Suddenly, The Royal Guards blow the trumpet to signify that The King comes. The King is in the one of verandas in the palace. Behind him is the royal family. They wave their hands to the citizens. The citizens stop their party. They are so happy coz they can see their King. They replay his hand wave. 
The King says, “ I am happy today coz my citizens want to come to my party. I give you the best things in this party and I hope that all of you enjoy it."
The citizens cheer happily. They continue the party. There are also Tucy and his friends. They take some snacks and drink. Tucy is shocked when he see Lily. That young turtle girl is behind him when he is taking ice cream. Lily is his friends. She is also the member of the royal family.
Tucy asks to Lily, “What are you doing here?”
“Enjoy the party,” Lily answers, then she says. “Let’s walk around!”
“But you should be with your family in veranda,” Tucy says. He speaks loudly coz it is so noisy.
“I know. But I am bored. I want to meet my friends.” Lily takes a deep breath. Then she yells to the others. “Hey, guys. Anyone wantS to join us?” 
“Where will you go?” Pepi asks. He has to scream among the loud music.
“I will accompany you to go around the palace.” Lili says. Now she does not need to speak louder coz her friends are around her.
“Really?” Kiki looks so interested. So does Yali. He does not believe that he will go around the palace. “That will be great!” 
“But all of you have to promise that you will not make any noise.” Lili asks her friends to make a promise. She does not want to mane any problem in this special night. Then her friends speak together. “Oke, we’ll promise.”
Lili smiles. “Follow me!”
Lili shows the secret way to enter the palace. No body knows them. They pass through a line. The line is dark and silent. In about 20 minutes, they arrive in the library. It is the central part of the palace. In this room, usually The King meets his assistants. 
Lili goes out from the library to see the situation. When everything is fine, Lili asks her friend to follow her. It is so quite there. Most of Royal Guards are centralized on the hall in 1st floor where the party is held.
Tucy, Lili and their friends are passing through family room when something falls then brokes. It shocks all of them. They stop in front of it. The door of the family room is opening mildly. They peek into the room. They see that The King and The Queen sit down in the sofa. Some of the Royal Guards are with them. But it is strange. They are tied. There are some soldiers from Brada Kingdom.
Brada Kingdom is the bird kingdom. They are the enemy of turtle. They often hunt the turtle for their meal. So that, every turtles should defend their-selves from this predator. But now, this predator enterS the turtle kingdom and holdS The King and Queen. Tucy and friends walk quietly faraway from the family room. 
“We have do something,” Lili whispers to her friends. They are panic.
Tucy remembers what his father said that he should be brave. One day he wants to see Tucy to be a knight and fight for the kingdom. So that, his father often coaches him to fight. His father wants Tucy to be A strong turtle.
Suddenly, Tucy feels so spirited. “ I have an idea. Lili, you goes down and tells the others Royal Guards. Yali and Pepi look for some weapon. We have to do something.”
“Then, what I should do?” Kiki asks to Tucy. Tucy tries to explain. “When we fight, you have to rescue The Royal Guards.”
“What?! Fight?!” Kiki shocks. She never fights before. But Tucy makes her sure. “Yes. I believe you can do that.”
Kiki gives the reason. She is afraid. “But we are not guards.”
Tucy looks at Kiki, then looks alternately to all his frIends. “We do not need to be A guard to save the kingdom, right?” 
“I agree with you.” Pepi agrees to Tucy. So does Yali.
Tucy smiles then speaks steadily. “So, lets do it!”
Tucy and his friends are back to the front of the library. They peek into the room.
“I will count to 3, then we attack together. Ready?” Tucy commands. His friends nod, signing that they agree. 
At the 3rd count, they enter the room quickly then attack the Brada knights. There are only 7 Brada knights there. No body knows how that knights could enter the palace. But if it is observed by looking at some Royal Guards who sprawl on the floor, the most likely, The Brada used inadvertence of the Royal Guards at this night party. They could enter the room by using one way. It was only from the tower that was connected to this room.
Tucy, Pepi, and Yali attack the Brada knight bravely. The Brada knights are so shocked. The Brada knightS do not think that they will get attack from the turtles. AltHough, they are not physically comparable, but Tucy and his friends do not care. They just want to rescue their King and Queen.
Tucy swings the rod of iron in his hand to the two of the Brada knightS. His tiny body makes his movement so agile. Likewise Pepi dan Yali, each of them has to fight for dear life. According to the plan, Kiki helps to relieve the Royal Guards. Some of them has begUn to realize. When Kiki helps the Royal Guards, one of the Brada knight tries to attack her. But Kiki can dodge. She gets in some hits to the Brada knight.
Fierce fight happens. Now, Tucy and friends does not fight alone. The Royal Guards are awake. Some of them secure the King and Queen, and the others help Tucy and friends fight the Brada knights. Shortly after, reinforcements come. They fight together beating the Brada knights.
Only few turtle know about this incidence. The King and Queen are safe. The Brada knights are defeated. The party goES on. The King says thank you to Tucy and his friends who fight bravely the enemy and save the King and Queen. 

THE END



- Hana Aina -



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21 komentar:

  1. What a great work :), aku tak bisa berimaginasi, jd gak bisa nulis fiksi. eh tp maaf, sedikit komentar boleh ya mbak, seingetku kalau cerita atau dongeng, pakainya past tense. Kalau yg bagian dialog langsung, present tense.

    BalasHapus
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    1. Haha ...

      Iya, ya, seharusnya. Tapi tantangannya disuruh pakai Present Tense :D :D

      Hapus
  2. Roaming, bacanya perlu sedikit2 soalnya saya nggak bgtu lancar bahasa inggris

    BalasHapus
  3. wahhh saya malah engga bisa nih bahasa inggris,.. salam kenal saja ya...hemb

    BalasHapus
  4. Gak baca hehehe..

    Mak belajar dmn nih biar ketularan nginggris jg hihi..

    BalasHapus
  5. Awesome! Bisa nulis dongeng sepanjang itu pake bahasa inggris. Jadi terinspirasi buat nulis beberapa artikel pake bahasa inggris juga nih mba Hana, hehe

    BalasHapus
  6. Saya bacanya pelan2 sambil bukain kamus hehehehe.
    Hebat ih bisa bikin fiksi, pakai bahasa Inggris pula.

    Salam ya bwt Tucy, si Pemberani :)

    BalasHapus
  7. Tucy, the brave turtle. Yeah, it's great. I think it's nice to tell my children about this story. It's not only a story telling but also moral education. Indeed, I love it.

    BalasHapus
  8. Keren alur ceritanya, keren juga bahasa inggrisnya. BTW, tantangan dari mana Mba Hana, untuk bikin cerita kaya gini?

    BalasHapus
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    1. Terimakasih.

      Itu tantangan dari guru saya ^^

      Hapus
  9. Bagus banget, Mbak, membangun ceritanya :)

    BalasHapus

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